Shoe Sore
Apr 30, 2016 16:30
Today, I walked a very long distance.
Unfortunately, since I wore unfamiliar shoes, I got a blister.
My skin was barked, and it hurts.
If you ignore your shoe sore, your foot may become arteriosclerosis obliterans.
Furthermore, if you ignore the symptom, there is a risk that causes a myocardial infarction and a stroke.
Therefore, you should wear shoes that fits your feet, and walk with a correct posture.
By the way, since your feet become slightly swollen in the evening, it's better to choose your shoes based on your evening feet.
Unfortunately, since I wore unfamiliar shoes, I got a blister.
My skin was barked, and it hurts.
If you ignore your shoe sore, your foot may become arteriosclerosis obliterans.
Furthermore, if you ignore the symptom, there is a risk that causes a myocardial infarction and a stroke.
Therefore, you should wear shoes that fits your feet, and walk with a correct posture.
By the way, since your feet become slightly swollen in the evening, it's better to choose your shoes based on your evening feet.
靴ずれ
今日は、とても長い距離を歩きました。
そして、履きなれていない靴だったため、靴ずれが起こりました。
皮がめくれて痛いです。
靴ずれを放置すると、閉塞性動脈硬化症に繋がる恐れがあります。
そして、この症状をさらに放置すると、心筋梗塞や脳卒中を起こす可能性もあります。
そのため、しっかりと自分の足に合った靴を履き、正しい姿勢で歩くようにしましょう。
ちなみに、夕方の方が足が浮腫むので、夕方の足を基準に靴を購入するようにしましょう。
今日は、とても長い距離を歩きました。
そして、履きなれていない靴だったため、靴ずれが起こりました。
皮がめくれて痛いです。
靴ずれを放置すると、閉塞性動脈硬化症に繋がる恐れがあります。
そして、この症状をさらに放置すると、心筋梗塞や脳卒中を起こす可能性もあります。
そのため、しっかりと自分の足に合った靴を履き、正しい姿勢で歩くようにしましょう。
ちなみに、夕方の方が足が浮腫むので、夕方の足を基準に靴を購入するようにしましょう。
No. 1 KayJae's correction
- Shoe Sore
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Shoe (Foot) Sore
Your foot is sore, not the shoe. However, a shoe sore could mean "getting a sore from the shoe," but this is not a common phrase.
- Today, I walked a very long distance.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- Unfortunately, since I wore unfamiliar shoes, I got a blister.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- My skin was barked, and it hurts.
- My skin was barked (torn/stripped off/My skin peeled off), and it hurts.
- If you ignore your shoe sore, your foot may become arteriosclerosis obliterans.
- If you ignore your shoe sore, your foot may (you might) become contract/get arteriosclerosis obliterans.
- Furthermore, if you ignore the symptom, there is a risk that causes a myocardial infarction and a stroke.
- Furthermore, if you ignore the symptoms, there is a risk that it will causes a myocardial infarction and a stroke.
- Therefore, you should wear shoes that fits your feet, and walk with a correct posture.
- Therefore, you should wear shoes that fits your feet, and walk with a correct posture.
- By the way, since your feet become slightly swollen in the evening, it's better to choose your shoes based on your evening feet.
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By the way, since your feet become slightly swollen in the evening, it's better to choose your shoes based on your evening feet (feet in the evening/foot size in the evening).
"Evening feet," is okay.
よく書きました！足の事は詳しく知っていますね。
Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post!
そう言ってもらえて嬉しいです (^^)
Thank you very much for correcting my post!
そう言ってもらえて嬉しいです (^^)